Sun is Setting

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By leann2800

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sun is setting

car is coming

dog is barking

cause it's not you


kids are sleeping

music playing

dog is moping

he misses you


clothes are folded

dishes are done

dog has been walked

he is okay



played games online

emailed some friends

dog wants a snack

or two today


maybe its pork

maybe its cheese

he forgot you

what should I do?


eat the same snack?

eat some gourmet?

it wouldn't help

i just want you.

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Paradise7 profile image

Paradise7 Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

I hope he comes home soon.

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leann2800 Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks Paradise. Our house is empty without him. And thank you for taking the time to read my poem.

b. Malin profile image

b. Malin Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

A Beautiful and Poignant Poem Leann. I too hope your man returns soon. I look forward to Following your Hubs and Thanks for becoming a Follower of mine,

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leann2800 Hub Author 3 months ago

I am looking forward to his return. Thanks for reading b. Malin. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Deborah Brooks 2 months ago

GREAT POEM... it's been three weeks.. he is home right? I can tell you missed him.. that's wonderful

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Debbie

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leann2800 Hub Author 2 months ago

Thanks for reading Deborah. Yep! He's home. I did miss him. The poor dog made himself sick...literally missing him so much. The whole house was going through the motion.

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Cloverleaf Level 7 Commenter 2 months ago

Ah, too cute. I enjoyed your poem very much, Leann!

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leann2800 Hub Author 2 months ago

Hi Cloverleaf.Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

Rosemay50 profile image

Rosemay50 Level 8 Commenter 6 weeks ago

I hope he is home by now. Easy to see how much you missed him :)

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leann2800 Hub Author 6 weeks ago

He is. Thank you for your support Rosemay

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